Thorn (thornsilver) wrote in metaquotes,
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If your character talks vaguely about an apple cut in half, and it's supposed to be a metaphor for her broken heart, I say, "Huh?" (Actually, that's only because I can't reach into the book and beat the character to death with a tire iron). Similarly, the character talking for three paragraphs about how the broken apple represents her broken heart makes me dream wistfully of going into the book and using a meat hook on her.




--limyaael.
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