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Adventures in novelwriting!

elialshadowpine is doing a rewrite of her novel, and has come across a few interesting goofs.

1. "He titled his head" is not equivalent to "He tilted..."

2. "Hard shift" and "Hard shaft" are two very different things.

3. When describing a character opening a condom, do not say "He ripped open the package."
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