only love .:. only sky (notalwaysweak) wrote in metaquotes,
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Dan Brown meta-meta.

Meta found here; hellpaladin2183 makes an excellent comment on The Da Vinci Code.

I liked the story, but the writing needed work. Not work like "Oh I think a few sentences need rewriting, akin to the facade of a building needing fixed", but work like "The structure is full of termites, the HVAC is rusted over completely, the windows are broken, half the siding is missing, and someone has parked their car in the kitchen while using the living room as a driveway". Dan Brown needs to learn foreshadowing. "He would get exactly what he wanted in a few short hours" is NOT foreshadowing.


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