I got out my red pen and corrected the errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, and so on througout the tract. I crossed out all but 3 of the Plagues of Egypt and wrote "redundant, please condense." I circled the places where the pronouns of God were capitalized, put in question marks and "Trite" where the language got flowery. At some point in the book, I circled an entire paragraph about torture and wrote "Good!" under it. Don't want to be COMPLETELY discouraging, after all! Finally, I got to the back cover and wrote my final grade: "D."
And under the grade, I put in a note: "Please see me after class. this is very disturbing."
Read the rest, it's great.